Beautiful and yet melancholy... Loved the write... So much said in so few words :)

This is a sweet sad poem. It does feel a little rhyme heavy and rigid, but I don't think it would take a lot of work to make this a great poem.

A heartfelt message and great flow. Awesome poem! I love the last stanza...it rings so true, all to often. But, find a way we must. Great job!

Good Rhymes.. and a good flow.. well done.. another great poem.. keep it up.

Luke. x

So short and sweet... loved ur poem lol!

luv,
Bharti

I usually don't like short poems, but this was really good! Keep it up!

-Brittany

That was wonderful... i loved the flow of the poem it worked very well. 5/5

Wonderful write Laura..... although a relationship has ended and it brings forth pain this write gives the message of a very postive and hopeful outlook for the future. Keep on writing......

Short but strong, direct...and somewhat intense...great poem hun keep it up :O)
PS: Thanks for your comment!
Risa

This is really good.. especially for such a short poem. You did a great job on this. I can definitely relate to this. Great job! 5/5*

Short and to the point and no less powerful for it. Emotional and evocative, beautiful 5/5 x