Comments : Lined paper and a pencil

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Absolutely brilliant! I'm truly at a loss for words after reading that.......
    I'll have to comment another time~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    I have been in the "friendless and bleeding" stage in my life as well, and I felt that was a very elegant, non crybaby manner in which to descirbe it. The poem was real to me, I empathized with it, and i am sorry you have to go through that.

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    I enjoy reading your poems, they appeal to the part of my mind that appreciates intellectual beauty.