Man this is really powerful! It is ful of emotion! I really liked it a lot! It is wonderful. I really liked the words, each word can touch something great! ful of wonder! Very good I loved it!!

This is good....5/5...i liked it a lot...good job

♥Melissa

Woww...i think im in love with everything u want..i can relate to everything!! =)

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I love this poem, its just amazing, keep it up
xxxxx

I was really confused by the first verse. The last line just didn't seem like a good line to end, seemed a bit incomplete. However, the rest of the poem was not effect. It was really well written. Keep writing.