GREAT! you have a way with words sean. I liked the way you poured your thoughts on
Paper. Ahem…I mean in the computer. Really liked it
especially the first and last stanza. One can really feel
what you’re saying. How long did it take you to write it?

May you be happy,
marjan

Most poems take me 5 minutes or so to write...

That's why you'll notice they're unstructured..

I think the poems that are written the quickest are straight the heart, because are really feeling them and the words are basically already there. If you're not feeling them then you struggle to find the words and they don't come out right. That's why poems from the heart are best, especially when they are 'unstructured' lol. Well, thats my point of view anyways.

Hi, my name is Sarah-Joy, and I love this poem =P So simple yet you go back and forth in ambivalence, which is complicting for some people, but you do it so beautifully =)
Keep on writing!
Take Care and God Bless

Complicating * for some people, sorry