Wow thats so good heartbreaking.. *tear*
well good job
xoxo

This reminds me of my first boyfriend and me:) nicce job i love it
<3 emma

I love this poem! i love the feelings and the ideas of the pieces of heart that will be kept so u cant hurt again! this is my favourite bit:
"Keep the pieces I wont need them anymore
Lock them up in your dresser drawer
So you will always have my heart
Keep it all, every part
Theres no one I love more than you
And I dont want pain to go through"
because of the imges i can see in my hed when i read these few lines, that make me smile but cry, well done, you're a really good writer xxx