Yeah another really nice poem.
very sweet and short.

'The sound of your voice makes my heart quiver
Its like a stream or an untamed river'

good but perhaps:

The sound of your voice makes my heart quiver
Its like the sound of a stream or an untamed river

this makes it flow better imo and:

'Every time we kiss, hug or touch
It makes me realize that I love you so much!'

could be

Every time we kiss, hug or touch
I realize that I love you so much!

hope I've helped
much love
Aaron (remo) xxx

Good Job!