Comments : Please baby one more time

  • 15 years ago

    by uNfOrGiVeNsiN335

    Awww... this really touched me. I know how you feel!

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    Good poem =)
    I know this feeling of wanting more,lol!
    lovely written piece hun
    keep it up
    (thanx for the sweet comment)
    Luv
    NemO xxxxxxxxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I can't believe this has been down-voted.. I understand that need to have just one more chance.. the last time that you can prove how much you want that person to stay in your arms. To hope that they want to dream the same dreams that you do, every night.. Well done. xx