Bill, this is awesome! A powerful message, absolutely love the second stanza. And the ending lines were perfect! Love it! ;o)

Bill, "Will You", so beautiful! Heartfelt and simply amazing! So sweet, any woman would love for this poem to be written for them, excellent write! ;o)

Powerful, deep and meaningful. the flow was great... Wonderfully penned.

GREAT POEM!

Beautifully described ways of life. the play of words is excellent.

enjoyed reading this immensely.

good luck and peace
shobhana