Aww you finished it, it's deeply sad and moving... Amazing write as always, the imagery is fantastic. I hope you're ok, haven't spoken to you in a few days *hugs*

-Stab xxx

I agree with stabsies, there were sum fantastic lines and descriptions in there, it was a very powerful poem. the ending was put together nicely too, in a sad sort of way tho.
take care hun xxxxx

WoW!!! that was truly amazing!!! very tru!!! keep writing!!!