Wow thats a really good poem. Good Job! its very I deep in its own way, and its sad to think that, that actually happens. Keep writing

Its cool dude

I love your poetry! o.o Its hard to find talented poets on this site. o.o I musch apreciate your writing! Don't stop for anyone! ^_^

Hey hey hey! great job! congrats. I really loved this poem especially cause of the title! a title means everything to a poem and u really captured that. I also really loved your rhyming scheme well done! the only thing I can find that it needs is a bit more flow but I can live with that. once again FANTASTIC poem stef and I hope to c more of your work soon ruthie xoxo

I love the last and third to last stanzas. they are the ones that hit me. good job. some of the flows is funky-ish. but i like it. :)

This was wonderful. And yes, sometimes ignorance is definately bliss. This was so sad. He lost two people he loved to one thing. Wonderful poem. But here's some constructive critique.

Change 'of' in this verse : A tear rolled of his face. to 'off'.

And change 'Al' in this verse: Al alone because of this. to 'All'.

Good work!
-Artimis-