Nice!

I like the way you write

I honestly couldn't wait till you would finish this poem. And I loved it hun. So beautiful. I really could see this little kiddy struggle through life.

You absolutely did a great job on this. Very well done =) I'm impressed haha.

You really did describe the world through they eyes of a child =)

Lotsaaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

I think that kids today aren't as tough as they used to be, they are protected too much.
I loved this poem - it stands up for kids

I like this poem. i think its cute. i like the way you changed the sticks & stones saying to words..will hurt me. very true. great job! 5/5*