I like it a lot. it has some very unique thoughts and wording...good job

The last stanza I really liked. I had to read it a few times to get the full meaning of it which is o.k. sometimes when it is a detailed poem.

~Retniapdoolb~
*Keep On Writing*

I really like it. you are talented with rhyme. it doesnt sound forced. um the rhythm changes a bit and it is a bit unexpected but that might be the way im reading it. oh and, in the first stanza line 4, shouldn't mind be minds. or something in the third line should be changed. i saw that type of grammer problem in one of your other poems. just keep that in mind. But awesome job. i love it!