It's pretty good. There's no rhyming in it, but that's ok.

The last phrase is pretty surpising.

Well done!
Keep writing
Lotsaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Well it was an impromptu kind of poem it just pop out my head... thanks i really want to improve my writing... before i wasn't really fond of writing but lately i've been trying to discover myself and found out that writing can be form of expressing yourself... thanks