Very beautifully written.
"your smiles, i pray would stay forever"
that is so well said, a heartfelt prayer that i hope comes true for you!

good luck and peace
shobhana

I also loved the line shobhana mentioned..wow.
What a powerful poem..who knew with such little amoutn of words, such a peice could be written.
Beautiful..and i can relate very much atm..so it hits home just that much more.
take care
>torn -x.x.x-

Excellent piece. Your last stanza just took my breath away.Such desires wont go unfulfilled. I'm sure you will get what you desire soon.

Great work once again. Loved it.
Good luck to you for your desire.

Love & Best Wishes
Michelle

Hey there,
"your smiles, i pray would stay forever"
Wow.. haha as other people who have commented, I also love this one line. Great job once again Nitin.
Monique

Hi Nitin,
i m amazes by reading ur love poems......i love the last lines..
Desiring, to be with you again
as this life is too long to live alone
and i give up as i can't live without you anymore

keep writing love poems...
luv,
Bharti

Heyy woah u really out did urself in this poem it's really good, I loved it. Keep up teh good work 5/5
xox
Kristen

Really moving piece , nice poem .

A beautiful, yet sad poem. i hope this isn't true... but if it is, i'm really sorry. stay strong and take care,
-xXx-

Hell0o. firstly thank u heaps f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t. this was really g0od. beautifully written. great use 0f w0rds t0o!!! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Again a nice poem. glad that i found such a talented poet as u to add in my favorites

Thats a very deep poem!
That felt like it came right from the heart.. Very meaningful well done

dave x

Oh wow.... I really like this poem alot.... I know exactly that feeling.... If you read all my poems, you'd know what I mean.... Good job.... This is deep...

Succh depth WOW..this is too good.

Lissa

This poem is so sad but it is exactly how I am feeling rite now, loosing a love. I hope you get your back soon.
god bless
Renee

Nitin
You write of so many diffrent things. This love poem is so full of sadness.

Desolation, sorrounding my life
with this haunting distance between us
and the memories you left behind

Mamories are so hard to live with.
Love Cindy