Comments : Use me

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I really liked this but I think you could imrpove the way the stanza's flowed. The reason I read this one was because I saw that it had no comments yet. So I'm glad to be the first. Nice word choice and alot of things I didn't know which made me think. And the best poems make you think, right?

  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    It is good to write about what you know.. you always end up asking and answering your ownself while others continue to being about slander.. they are weak and you are strong..

    Let me share a poem with you it is called "why hate me"... been there..... keep up the good work...

  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    Oops.. my comment above was not meant for me... (smiling) silly me...

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    This was good. i liked the way it flowed and it made me laugh, whether it was supposed to or not :/ i liked it though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammy

    Oh Mario, That was wonderful. You seem to know your bible..lol
    I am a sunday school teacher so I have taught most of those stories..lol
    It all came together wonderfully! Great to let people know NO MATTER WHAT, God can use them! People need to know that. Great write!!
    Take care