by Kaylee
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I really liked this but I think you could imrpove the way the stanza's flowed. The reason I read this one was because I saw that it had no comments yet. So I'm glad to be the first. Nice word choice and alot of things I didn't know which made me think. And the best poems make you think, right? |
by StMario
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It is good to write about what you know.. you always end up asking and answering your ownself while others continue to being about slander.. they are weak and you are strong.. |
by StMario
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Oops.. my comment above was not meant for me... (smiling) silly me... |
by PS
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This was good. i liked the way it flowed and it made me laugh, whether it was supposed to or not :/ i liked it though. |
by Tammy
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Oh Mario, That was wonderful. You seem to know your bible..lol |