Wow I loved this poem. *takes dictionary in hand, "forgot what salvation means"...Oo now I get it"* .. Ghehe.. learnt a new word

Well done =) Loved to read it. I love those short powerful AND thoughtful phrases. =)

Lotsaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Wow i know you like comments that are constructive or say something..but there's nothing to improve and i'm speachless!
It's inspiring while being slightly depressive..i love the mixture..wow.
Well done mike=)
xoxox
PS: thank u so much for that comment..ill tyr and fix those lines

Great......loved it.....5/5