WOW.. i loved the last stanza.. actually, not just the last stanza, i loved the whole poem.. every line was so deep.. shows how much u observe life... beautiful... just beautiful... keep writing..
5.5

Much Love,
Ipsita

Simply great!!!!
such a lovely message and so touching....
rarely i get to read such poems.....and everytime i find something new in ur poems Kumar.....
keep writing!
Bharti

Im quiet speechless. After reading this poem , i felt "So I should Always Give It A Try"...
very inspiring , thanks.

Take care
chavii.

Wow, now im thinking i should just smile & give it a try. thanx

Wow 5/5

so true. we shud all smile heaps and live up the life we have.
afta reading this i felt and feel so confidant. thnx for ur comment.its so sweet.

takecare
sonam

Wow 5/5

so true. we shud all smile heaps and live up the life we have.
afta reading this i felt and feel so confidant. thnx for ur comment.its so sweet.

takecare
sonam

You have an amazing natural talent........wow.........I love all yours........you're so amazing........
xoxo
Cassie

Kumar
A very touching and inspirational piece...glad to see you writing again...

love ya, Ann

A beautiful penned writting by great poet like you..."Underneath all words, then, must be love, Articulate and frank, though rarely spoken, Gift of those who through our maelstroms move, Each a mirror in a line unbroken." well done!

Ok, I can't resist to leave a comment..I love ur writing, its so touching. This one is beautiful, really really beautiful, loved it
5/5

Great j0b 0n this 0ne darl. very well written with a great use 0f w0rds. w0nderful w0rk! keep it up

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Love your time poems.

i like your poem very much. your thought as my thought. it is as like i wants to write.

life gets only once its we have to live it or happily at any cost we have to defeat our fortune.

Wow.. your sucha good writer.. keep up the GREAT work.. lTER!