I love this poem it makes me cry.

Hey hun, great poem, your a very talented writer, it seems to have a lot of depth and emotion in it, i know how you feel, if you ever need to talk feel free to email me, if you could comment on some of my poems id greatly appreciate it,
lv cass xoxo

Nice poem - well, not really, the images were so real they were horrible

When you told me that we were threw

Threw should be Through

And in the first two lines of the second stanza, you repeat the word 'heart' which kind of takes the power from the stanza.

Other than that - very impressive, dark and sad. Beautiful!

Peace. [Sole]

Well written the flow is very smooth and the content pritty deep.

5/5

This poem was very well written!!! I have only ever written a few poems on suicide and usually I'm not a fan, but the way you wrote yours was very easily read and realistic!!! Never stop writing. : )

Oh, that's pretty dark and powerful. The structure of the poem is good and works well, it was a fantastic read. For someone who hasn't been writing long you do a brilliant job x

Nice flow and feel.... some really great lines here, good work!

Short and nice! I liked it, although it was sad it was well written. The rhymes, which were really good, made it easier and more plesant to read I think :)
Keep up the good writing! 5/5

Aw.. that is such a sad poem.. and i could definitely relate to it (minus the cutting part) You did a great job on putting so much emotion into this poem. I loved it. great job on this!

Hey great job hunny. I'm adding you to my favorites

Apparently I already commented upon this don’t remember doing so though… and it did not really do it justice… so I’ll write a better one for you.

This piece is very good, the flow and structure are well created. The final stanza being shorter than the rest is very effective and finishes the piece off well. The rhymes are smooth and the content well expressed.

5/5

Very emotional. i could almost hear the pain screeching out.
i hope these arent true thoughts though.
Very good effect overall, your wording was interesting, yet remotely blunt in a way that hits you hard if you stop and think about it.
5/5

Gr8 work very sad congrats on gettin runner up in my contest...5/5

This is a very good poem, i liked it but i think that in some parts of the poem you are forcing the rhyme and it detracts from emotion...but otherwise it was a good write

One of the best i've read in a long time. its similar to how i write. excellent job

Very sad poem, but also was very well written. Great Job!

OMG - very well written!

Great poem!!