This is pretty good. I love the story it tells. It's so real. I can tell it came right from your heart. You've put a lot of feelings in it. And I love that.

Very well done
Lotsaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Wow. well done.
lol
i like it. alot.

Goes with the other poem-also a good one...

your poems are great....all of them

october xx