Honestly, I didn't really get this when I first read it but I admire your word choice. 4/5

The flow is brilliant, the language wonderful and the poem beautifully written. Great :)

The imagery is excellent! I had to read it a few times, purely because it's one of those poems that makes your heart beat faster as you read through it :) Well done!

Peace. [Sole]

Great poem.. With a good change over.. well done keep it up.

Great poem...loved it..one of your best!.....
~*Linz*~

Amazing, very deep and emotional
True talent :)

You are most definitely one of the most talented poets on this site and you are simply amazing.

your choice of words is fantastic, the vocabulary florid and i can say for sure you will go a long, long way!

love and peace
shobhana

Wow, awesome Write. I loved it.

~Joe~

Wow i lvoed it i didnt get it the frist time i read it then i reread it and i love it, its so powerful keep up the good work

This is really good. The description of it was very vivid & the flow of this is really good. My favorite lines were:
Did it ever even happen?
Nobody knows
For I am the only witness of my own glory
Those really stood out to me. You did a great job on this! 5/5**

I loved it!! great word choice!! love the title!! 5/5!!

White vampires]--That's original. Nice job