I really liek this poem, it has suspense to it that made me want to continue reading. i have a poem similar to this called one selfish drink, check it out if you life:) good job, keep it up!

I love ur poem alot...def 5/5 if u keep writing i'll keep reading

Gabbi that was deep! Thx for writing about me.

I dont know... but it was just.. good??? idk y

Awww this is nice