I like it but I dont love it. you need to bring more deep emotion to others. But thats why I gave you a 4 but Im hoping to see more. Keep up the good work

I realy like this one too
i could relate to this one

This poems really good, but i only have one criticism, fix the spelling mistakes.
they take the emotions out of the poem and it takes more time trying to figure out what its saying than actually reading it.
good work tho, 5/5
-forever tied (steph)