Superb write... Your talent is so evident in this piece. Shame you have to leave our club *sigh*... I'll keep a tab on your work and check back often :)

I enjoyed this read, it was very rich and refreshing!

I really laughed out loud on this one Holly

I enjoyed it.....gr8 job

luv,
Bharti

Hah. I love it, funny poem.

Hahahahahah omg that is freakin funny.. ur good

Funny poem. Good work on it. Its superb =3 ^^

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That creative poem, lol....

Oh Holly, this is great! So cute and funny, awesome job! ;o)

That was a very good poem, i like it!

Holly ,
Ahahaha I love it girl !
I am sooo glad you joined in our craziness ........lol

I betcha when people first started reading this in the funny section they were saying " OMG ".......lmao

I love the creativity within this poem .
I just loved it ! Holly ! or should I say princess Holly .....LMAO

Anyways glad to have you within our club for a few days .....even though I missed the last day .....(boohoo)

Holly! very creatively done. had me in splits!

shobhana

LoL
I THOUGHT THIS PEOM WAS FUNNY AND VERY CREATIVE I THOUGHT IT WAS THE BEST YET

GOOOD JJJOOOBBB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn Holly,

I loved the way, you created a story about daydreaming in the shopping mall. This is truly a great poem.

Brill poem. lol. i luved it! erika xx

"Sitting there
anticipating my move
eagerly awaiting to
be freed from the
constraints that bind"

^ so me! love the poem. great idea! i have a feeling most people on this site can some what relate to this poem, especially the women! extremely well done and very cute.

~Jacklyn

Nice poem. =]

I saw your post in the myspace
group, so I figured I'd check you
and your poems out. =]

5/5

"Quixotic Desire (Collaboration)"

Wow, beautiful collab! The flow was absolutely breathtaking and the wording, just perfect! Incredible poem!