Thats good...i like it!

Omg that is so beautiful!! I LOVE IT!!!
keep writing cos i'll never stop reading

xxx

Love it huni....keep it up.

nami
xoxo

Hey, great poem. It finally made me understand why my guy friend is so into my other friend when she's moved on and what not. but anyways. THanks and keep it up!

p.s. please comment on mine :D