I love your poem!!
keep up the great work!
Ris

I gotta say, i liked it. It flowed well and had this ting of hate to it.

Overall the poem is pretty good, except this line-
"Or ill stab you with sporks."

That rhyme seems forced and sporks is kind of an odd word. Why didn't you just use forks?

Lol...because i like sporks...if u didnt know what sporks are, they are a cross between a sppon and a fork...i like them xD

Wow babe i like the ending it was good
very strong very detail
but your name is Nicole
ya know
just in case you forgot
but its beautifully written
Love you so much