Great poem!

It's long, but the way it's written draws the reader in, and it doesn't make it seem soo long..

Great write.. keep 'em coming!

Superb stuff Bill... Mysterious, dark and very tantalising! Enjoyed this one.

Wow, this was awesome. I love the story, intense and suspenseful! There were so many brilliant lines throughout this poem, incredibly done!

Oh wow, at first when i scrolled i thought that it was just guna be another long poem, but as i read it, i didnt even really notice, it just drew me in and i got lost in ur words, keep up the gd work!
-Jenna xo

Wow.
You are such a good writer.
That was really well written.
Loved it!
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That is one deep poem mate! keep it up

Such a Long Poem.. But It's Soo Good And Flows Soo Well That It Goes Really Fast.. well Done Another great Poem!

I Thought This Poem Sounded Familiar.. I'm Sorry I've Read It Before.
:P

That Is realy awesome imagery, like a mini thriller! The next James Patterson

That Is realy awesome imagery, like a mini thriller! The next James Patterson

I like it...it shows how important your family is and how theyre always there when u need em most...im not close wiith mine but this def makes me wanna be...lol...i adore it!!!! lol

Wow, that was really good. Full of suspence and dramaa. oviouss talen you got there! thnnx for that:)