I love this poem, it reminds me of all the people at the moment who seem to want to pretend everything is alright. . .
Keep writing =]

I usually vote for poems I love and well I'm definately going to vote for this one. I agree with azlan26 when it comes to what it reminds me of.

Bravo! Bravo! You seem very good at expressing
Yourself. How long have you been writing poetry?
This person you can not call a friend. As you said
A friend is someone who loves you for you. But
The more somebody behaves you like this, the
More you should be good to them cuz that’s our
Human task. Our task isn’t to be loved but to love.
Ain’t it? I really loved the way you wrote this.
You seem like a really good friend.
Much love,
marjan

Oh dear! i know how u wer feeling at that time.......but cheer up dear!
a true friend will accept u as u r.......

good write
luv,
Bharti

I love this poem...it touched me..... it makes me realize that people should like you for who you are...thanks...that was a very nice poem to read!....5/5!
~*Linz*~

A lot of ppl can relate to apoem like this.. well done

I really loved this poem. I can realte to trying to hold on to someone so bad when they are just slipping away and making things difficult fore you. But in the end belive me its better that you let them go.. things become easier.. after time of course

TELL IT LIKE IT IS GURL!!!

TELL IT LIKE IT IS GURL!!!

Nice poem i love it the point was great.
keep up the good work 5.5

Hey, i really like this poem. I can relate to it alot. I had a friend like that once....I hope you ditched 'em! they aren't worth it.

This is really good. And its so true, A true friend would love you for who you are. And im sorry to hear that this poem is based on a true feeling of yours. Keep up the great work! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

This is such a wonderful poem! an i mean it too. I like the way you described how hurt you were when they rejected you. An if it meant that much to you, it WOULDN'T be something stupid. Not if you really like these people.

I agree with natalie a true friend would love you for who you are, and it really sux when that happens to you :S but cheer up you've wrote an excellent poem ! 5/5

~StefQ

I loved this poem. it shows strong emotions, very good. keep it up! 5/5*

This is a very good poem hun keep up the good work

and reply to ur comment...
- it happened to my cousins friend... in a smaller town... but yas

Nice work! you need to let this "friend" hear this... keep it up!

Excellent job.. I really really liked this one its so true.. and it seems to have alot of feeling behind it 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Wow.. really great poem. I now how you feel, i've been down that road. 5/5

Actually this is a REALLY godo illustaration sry you went through this..but i knoo i have doen this before.. think most everyone has if not for at least a brief moment or too.

i am so glad that u were able to finally write this..this is amazing ur good pelase keep writing gurl.

lissa