Good poem, even though its quite short and the lines are sometimes ony a word long i think it really puts across ur point and is really well written. the formation in this poem is very effective. xxx

I like this! Great message. Especially this part:

"Were you left behind?
Or just too weak to go on?"

Well done...
Take care and keep it up~Holly

*Oh and there's a new challenge with CC&P that I think you should participate in. Check the EOP forum :)