Awww i rally like this. and i can relate to it. i'm sure a lot of people can. amazing job writing it. keep writing you're good at it 5/5

Perfection...greatly written...kept my intrest...was beautiful...Nice job...
Emma 5/5

Aww. This was so cute! You used alot of elements of poetry and I loved how you expressed your love and compassion towards this person. Good job!

Nice poem.keep ^ the good work

This is an awesome poem!! it's so sweet!
you're a great writer... 5/5 :)
take care, xoxo
(ps. thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem!!)

Wow this is a great poem you are really creative and many of us can relate to that! its so sweet!

This is a wonderful poem, i can feel the emotion and its really just sweet, and really cute.

Great Job
5/5