I really liked it. You pointed out that if we feel something for someone, we need to tell them before its too late. 5/5

-Brittany

AWSOME!!!!! ur soo good at this!

GREAT WORK! You are so much better at this than me i sure hope i get this good

Another great poem and another true one... If only some things lasted forever, then maybe people would have broken hearts.. ;)

I like this. Looking at the layout I thought it wouldn't flow and therefore I wouldn't like it but somehow the flow seemed to be really good...
Polly

This was a really nice penned up poem! i loved it

Keep it up!