Comments : Beach Beauty - Part 2

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    "Your memory that is clinging to my clothes"

    I absolutely love that line! It is brilliantly written, but the entire piece is spectacular. You set the scene beautifully without losing momentum throughout the poem. Truly great stuff.
    Love ya~Holly

  • 16 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Omg this is real cute... i like the whole thind but my favorite part is the line that said... Only built for two... thats a cute line. great poem 5/5