Comments : What i see

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Lovely...full of passion of love......
    loved the last stanza dear!

    much luv,
    Bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    I just hope one day to hear 'I love you too'

    that one line is what got me tearin, great poem hunni xox me

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    I want you to be the someone I call
    I want you to be there, when I fall
    You helped me through, and I loved you then
    I never stopped, now I love you again

    I can't give up on the best thing in my life
    No matter how much I suffer through the strife
    I'll be here waiting, what happens next is up to you
    I just hope one day to hear 'I love you too'

    i love this poem all the way but these stranzas were the best.
    5/5
    dont give in to ur hope.hold on to them coz ur hopes will guide you to ur dream come tru.

    love you
    takecare
    nami