WOW! Truly interesting and surely draws you a beautiful picture and makes you want to read on...excellent job....enjoyed this read....

love Ann

Amazing....u potrayed a beautiful picture....wonderful job!

luv,
Bharti

Beautifully woven thread of one versus one's conscience. the ending was simply wonderful.

enjoyed reading this!

love and peace
shobhana

Very long and descriptive...I love it! keep writing ......sorry it took me a while to look at them....
xoxo
Cassie

THIS WAS REALLY GOOD AND I REALLY LIKE IT GREAT JOB

Ill be honest i wasnt playin on reading the hole thing but as i read i was hooked an before i knew it it ended*disapointment*

I loved it your a creative original taleneted writer

Great write

5/5