Maybe a little too heavy on the "nobody loves me" side. Being emo is not a good thing by the way, be gothic, or be normal, emos are wannabe goths, and that's very sad, your poem is quite good though, keep writing!
Helen

Great poem.................

yeah i know thats all you can give right now. i cant keep liking you tho and then getting hurt. but dont think i dont like you. i do and alwayz kidna will but im gonna stop liking you as much ok? i just hope your happy with her ok? i really do. well, call me tontie

Nick, you know that i do love you so dont say that no one doesnt love you cuz you know i do.

Hey! sry i havent been on here much..lol i've been busy! im ok..what about u??? ~KC

Yo yo yo sexy wassup?

Um alrighty then