A t0uching piece. very heartfelt and p0werful. thank u f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Each stanza is a sugar cube. the flavor of sweetness explodes in my mouth, and i revel in the taste and the tingleness. when its all dissolved, my mouth waters for more.

Hey i liked this....especially this hit me...

*In truth I know it won't happen,
So I have to deal with this heart break zone,
Cry, throw things, live quietly,
Because I know you'll never come home

If I knew that was our last date,
I would have held you tight,
Kissed you deeply,
Kept you by my side all night*

i never thought of it that way...I would have done the same if i knew it was my last 'happy' time i get with her....oMG! if i only knew....but im okay i have a new girl in my life so i get all the happy times i want

Again some cliche lines being mixed with original descriptions. Find where your strong points are and stick to it.