This was alright. It wasn't fantastic but it was alright. But it just feels like words. That's all words. Try putting some emotion into so taht we could feel it.

This was good. But maby you could change "That someone cares" to "That someone who cares" Anywho it was good 5/5 =]

luv natz x0x

This is a really cute home 5/5

I really liked the thoughts and feelings you expressed in the poem but the flow was a bit off and made it hard to settle into a rhythm while reading but overall a good poem well done xx ALLY xx