I think its good. it pretty much describes how i feel about my ex bf.

You sound kind of confused. You say how he never crosses your mind but how you miss him. A little bit of confusion. Other wise..good job hunn..*

This is a great poem.... so the only thing I would change is chance to tries... it rhymes with eyes... but the rest is perfect... loved it... reminds me of... well u kno...lol 5/5

::MELI::

I like it alot it's so nice I just would change chances to tries cause it rhymes and makes sense, but I really like this poem and your other poems too.

I thought it was good
-katie