Nice job expressing your self keep it up 5.5

Great poem kayla! i know how you feel. that feeling really sucks, doesn't it? well, i hop things get better for you! Keep up the good work! and thanks for commenting on my poem!

Good job..I like it! :)

Hey hun...great poem...the only thing I would suggest is fixing the flow because it seems to be a bit off...but other then that very nice job. Oh and thanks for the comment on my poem it means a lot to me...much love

-kayla-

p.s.-what part of michigan are you from?

Aww so so so awsome!! great poem!!! 5/5

Baby Ashmo