Comments : Slice me lovely

  • 18 years ago

    by mayme

    "don't let my bleeding heart.. control yours" I love that line. I stopped and read it a few times. It makes me think about people who are abusive to others, because they are insecure about themselves.

  • 18 years ago

    by Christine

    Once again another emotive poem. I love your use of language, I think this has a lot of hidden depth to it

  • 17 years ago

    by GothChick

    Great poem! Your poems have deep meanings and they are wonderful to read! Keep it up!