Nice job.. I liked it

Yay death!!! ^_^ I have a bunch more death poems but I don’t think you’d want to read the whole list so I decided I’d just slim it down to a few that is if you’re interested. Ha ha you’re dead is one of my best along with swinging out of life and into death. I’ll watch you die until the end, I kill for pleasure, and here I am is a twisted love poem that I bet you’d love. Well you don’t have to read any of them if you don’t want. C ya.
Van

Wow, that's deep. I really like this. It's really dramatic :p