Hey..
Its a good poem, and i just wanted to say sorry about ur loss..:( keep ur chin up babe.
Monique

Im am very sorry for you loss Clark..This poem has so much emotion and greif within it..i can feel every tear and feeling of emptyness just by reading it...well done...Stay Strong Clark i am sure that he would have wanted you to continue living your life...Joc

... im so sorry for your loss *hugs* i'm here if you ever need to talk. stay strong and take care,
-xXx-
P.S. amazing poem by the way

Wow. Excellent poem.

Isn't it strange how the worst things about life...
Bring out the best in anothers?

Little comfort i'm sure. It really made me think this poem:

"Another Father lost his son"

Works the other way around.
Another Son lost his father,
A grandchild lost their granddad,
A great grandchild lost their great grandad...

The impact is endless.

Well done with the poem :)
and my heart goes out to you and your friends' friends and family.

Very heartfelt and I am sorry about your loss. Beautiful tribute in your poem and very heartfelt. Keep writing and keep sharing my friend

Clark,

I know I said about a week ago I'd comment, and I'm sorry it took so long for me to do so. Oddly the world is a very connected place. And I know what your going through because I too lost a friend, and a dear one at that. I love this poem, and I love how you are able to say everything that I have yet to comprehend. As I've said before, if you need anything let me know okay? You did a wonderful thing for Sameer. Remember those who leave us are never really gone. Smile at the memories, and know they are watching you and looking out for you

Jenn

Hi Clark, I am really in awe by your poetry. It is very clear that the words read are of the heart. My heart goes out to you and your friend along with his family. I'm very sorry for your loss. The emotions during these times are endless but i'm sure he would have wanted you to attempt standing stong once again. I agree with Jenn, what you did for Sameer is a wonderful thing. I know it's been offered many times, but i'm another person that is here for you if you need any thing. I really love this poem.=)

Johanna

An absolutely astounding poem Clark..it's heartbreakingly beautiful.
I am so sorry for your loss..
If you ever need anything i am here for you.
*hugs*
xoxo

Wow! that was amazing! It's been a couple years since two of my friends passed away, but it gets easier after time. that was truly an awesome poem though, you have some real talent.