Wow.... brilliant!! i absolutely love your style... looking forward to reading more :P and welcome to the club!!
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That certainly sent chills down my spine...I love the connection you have with nature and the memories attached....sounds amazing....

Personally I'm currently saving up for an electric....but I've never played a 12 string acoustic...is it basically an acoustic with 12 strings?

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I really like this, I love the way you describe how different everything seems. It's got a really deep feeling to it. Well done and thanx for commenting my work too. It's interesting seeing how different people percieve the same subject.

Fantastic description, u use teh words really well, this poem has a strong rhythm and great rhming, like ur other poems! keep it up! xx

Fantastically written. 5/5