Comments : Contridictions

  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    GOod, you are asking the right questions... this may be a burden to you and concerned.. be that but, dont worry your worries!...

    may I ask you to ready one of my poems it is called "communication verses worries"

    I hope this will give you some imput.. that will help you if not anyone else.. Good work on expressing yourself..

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Firstly the title works, thats a really good thing. Then I like the contradictions in themselves and the way it was written. I thought it was excellent. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Breath of fresh air. I love this poem, right now this is so relevant to me. Nice way of getting it across...

    "my mind is twisting and turning
    turning about.
    loving and hating you
    for all the good and the bad. "

    Great stuff...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]