This was a beautiful poem yet another gooder way to go I also have a new heart renching poem this one is sad but believe me u should check it out its call "I think I'm Dying" I got one comment from a girl who said she nearly cried its gold

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Aw thats such a cute poemm!!.. keep up the worrkk!! 5/5

Wow i really love this poem ya me to i'm going through the same thing but he just like me but all guys are the same but what can we do right well love the poem: )

Loved it.. really cute poem.

Dat wuz cute yo! i think almost everyone in here who have read diz poem can relate to it!
5/5!! great job! simply beautiful..

Very nice poem.. Hope the person you are writting about gets to see them.

So emotional and true! i give you 5/5!

and thanks for the comments and rate on my poem.
happy new year!

I liked it :)
"When everything reminds you of that person
When your watching tv, eating, taking a shower, laying in bed, going to a party"
This is so true when you fall in love

Yes that's what happen when you are in love....makes you risk everything...nicely expressed....:)