Great job! I know that feeling too, When you meet someone, And then a few months or years later, You fall for them, And you think to yourself, I never woulda guessed that i would back then. This poem is fantastic, Really liked it! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Wow good poem and i also know the feeling lol liked it alot ! 5/5

~StefQ

Good poem sweet thanks for commenting on mine
han

It's a well written poem. I like it alot. The only thing I have to say is that the whole "Big Letter In The Beginning Of Every Word" is a little annoying and the poem lose a little of its magic so to speak.

Beside from that. It's a really great poem. ^_^

*BrokenToy

This is a really good poem... and the big letter thing don't worry about it, i think it looks more professional... anyways you should tell this guy how you feel, what do you have to loose??

I love the last line - this poem reminded me of what my friend is kinda going through
I loved the use of the school years, it highlighted how you change as you grow older
Great well done =]

Hey, thanx for the comment! i rili like this poem and i cant def relate to it. i love the way ou expressed it. great job 5/5, jesxxxx

Wow .. I loved this poem.. You did an amazing job on it 5/5..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Good poem. you've really get some feelings out. it's very original, i like it. keep up

WOW AMAZINGGGGGG...thtas rly rly rly kewl.. i LOVE IT. Wow another one of my favs'.

Lissa

Wow... thats all i have to say... to be honest out of all i have read of your poems this one is great... it might even be the best...