That was very very sad! nicely writen.5/5
~*Katherine*~

Aw wow. Thats really good, and sad. I loved this stanza "
I tried to end my life,
I tried to overdose.
My friends wouldn't let me,
but damn I was close."
That was really good. 5/5
luv natz x0x

That rocked! Keep up the great work!

I=loved=it=your=awsome=at=writing=

I really love ur poem but u shouldnt try to end your life, no matter how terrible u are feeling there is always tomorrow. when you are dead what happens then?! do they have tomorrows in heaven....

Awesome poem, david. 5/5 fo sho

Wow, Awesome Poem. I loved it. well written peice of work.

Awww. i absolutely LOVED the last stanza soooooo cute.. and sad

I say goodbye to the ground below.
I say goodbye to the stars above.
but you will always stay,
in my heart full of love.

^^ WoW amazing. it put such a better impact on it 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Hey this was a very good poem as well.....

"I went outside to breath,
to catch myself some air.
My hearts been waiting for someone,
but no one was ever there."

I love those lines from this poem, I know how that feels.....ok take care!

Yet another astounding poem written by you....Amazing....Yet so sad....if you ever need anyone to talk about problems you can always private message me on p&q im always here to help ppl:D....anyways this was my favorite stanza:
I went outside to breath,
to catch myself some air.
My hearts been waiting for someone,
but no one was ever there.

I loved it,it was beautiful! great write 5/5 i enjoy reading your poems your going on my favorites
love,
steph*xthesetearsfalldownlikerainx*

Aw i can totally relate. this is so sad:( amazing work, yet again

Sad but well expressed
an amazing write coming from the heart
the piece has something that pulled me to read it from the begining to the very end
brilliant i will say