Ahh babes i hearts dis!!! hun u have talent:D:D read mine plz...:P
love ya

Wow, i loved this poem, it was brilliant! great work hun xxxxx

Damn this is really an beautiful poem indeed, lovely theme and a great way of writing it.

all the best and take care
5/5

Awsome. I like this poem because it tied your thoughts together. Excellent. 5/5
-Vino

I can soo relate to that one too! Really well structured, powerful stuff. xx