GREAT POEM! I LOVED IT! I FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT THIS BOY, ONLY DIFFERENCE IS HE IS MY BEST FRIEND AND I CANT TELL HIM I WANT MORE. THANKS SO MUCH FOR THIS POEM! PLEASE READ AND COMMENT ON SOME OF MINE. I'D LOVE THAT! THANKS

XOX TIFFANY

I think you should of have express more of your hidden love and why is hidden. don't get wrong u did a good job and you just was breif and to the point.