Another great poem!! I love all of your poems so far.. write some more so i can read em ay.. Keep it up!

wow great poem, i can rlate to this alot!
i have voted at a 5, could you please have a look at my new poem (do i.....)
i would appreciate it very much if you could could comment
thanks jemma
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another great poem, all of your poems are so awesome, i like this style too, with the repitition, good work