This was good....But...It kinda ruined it how you had such long stanza, And then turned into little lines, It was good. I like how you did "If I'm stuck on earth
I die"
That was cool! 5/5 =]

luv natz x0x

You should cut that one long line into two seperate lines. Also I would reccomend upper casing you i's. Also I think you mean destroying: Building, mating and destroy.

Nice idea but I think it would have been great if you went in depth either descriptions or emotionally. 4/5

Very intresting. lol it was a good thought and somthing to think about nice job

'and I don't want too' - that should be to not too
thats my fussy bit over
the rest speaks right to my heart
i love the use of humans as ants, it emphasises our alikeness to other creatures
keep writing :)

Thoughtful poem, great! really made me think, keep up the good work.

5/5

I love the last few lines of the poem. The last part makes complete sense. Awesome way of ending it. 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

To true sadly, but small parts of humanity are trying to stop the wanton slaughter of the earth. I liked the message anyways good job

Nice poetry - I really enjoyed the effective last few lines, and thelast line strikes a great impact on the reader.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow...this poem is so different and intrigueing..I love it!

"The world is changing
and I'm just a bystander
Watching as mankind destroys,
destroys itself with its knowledge"

I love this stanza because it's so true! Good job...5/5

Thanks for your comments

This was cool. Maybe you could make it a little bit longer, But it was still good. Keep it up =]

luv natalie x0x